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*inserts senior picture so you have to scroll to see the cover & also because the sky is pretty & this accurately portrays my excitement*
photo cred//country girl photos
The

Dawn

Chandler

cover

is

now

revealed🎊
I'm so so so happy with how it turned out! Liza Proch did an amazing job!!! 

Interview with the cover designer:

Introduce yourself briefly please.
Hey y’all!  I’m Liza, a Texas-hill-country-native and avid lover of art, design, and creativity. I love music and coffee and play folk-pop music in a band with my three brothers, called Willow City.
Ah yes! I love Willow City’s album. If you haven’t heard it yet, you should. Also, great name! Hahaha...


When did you first start doing art as a business?  
I’ve always loved art and design, but really decided it was something I wanted to turn into a career when I was 17.  I created a website, got some content together, and I’ve been revising, growing, and learning about owning a business ever since!
What's been your favorite project so far?
I’m currently working on a huge collection of floral paintings that I’ll have up for sale soon and I think this is my favorite project to date!  The vibrant colors and bold designs are so inspiring to work with.
Oooh, I love vibrant colors!
What are some of your other hobbies?
I’m a big fan of audiobooks and podcasts, so even though those aren’t technically “hobbies”, that’s something I love doing!  I’m passionate about creating...whether it’s a new recipe, a sewing project, or a piece of art.
I love audiobooks too!

What's your favorite book?
My favorite book is Evidence Not Seen by Darlene Rose. It’s a fantastic autobiography about a life devoted to Christ. Highly recommend!
I’ll have to read that one! Thanks for answering my questions and for the fabulous cover 😊

A look back:
Before having an official title I messed around creating various different covers. I thought it'd be fun to share those here. My sister was very cooperative and modeled in several of them.






Anyways, all that to prove that this one is by far the best 😅 One of the reasons I decided to hire someone was because I noticed most middle-grade covers were illustrated. 
The publishing date has been pushed back five days later than I announced in my last post.  Don't forget to add it on Goodreads!
Thank you to everyone who shared the cover today! I hope you all have a lovely Resurrection Sunday 😄

Saturday, April 20, 2019 8 comments
Hi there! My book has a title, book blurb, cover reveal date, and release date!!! I'm so excited to have an official plan and be able to share it with you.
After going through many different title changes over the past 7 (yes, 7!) years the first book in my Dawn Chandler series is simply titled...
Dawn Chandler
Back Cover Blurb:
Dawn Chandler likes the way her life is— or was. She liked going to the mall with her best friend, excelling at middle school, and attending church with her family. Typical life for a twelve-year-old in the city of Fresno.

When Dawn’s parents announced they were going to homeschool her, on her birthday no less, she felt like her world was falling apart. Normal kids are supposed to go to school, not read books at home. To make matters worse, they may be leaving the only home she’s ever known.

What are her parents thinking?

Before making the final moving decision, the Chandler family visits Lone Pine, a small town between Mt. Whitney and Death Valley. While there, Dawn and her siblings become acquainted with their eccentric great uncle, explore the new area, and meet a large homeschooling family. All of this makes the 'vacation' more bearable. Still, Dawn isn't sure if she can make the move and leave everything she’s familiar with behind.

Can Dawn learn the values of faith, family, and contentment?

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Friday, March 29, 2019 6 comments
Hi there, my name is Bree Dawn. I'm one of Eliza's friends and I cannot tell you how honored I am to be guest posting over here on her amazing blog. Eliza and I share many things in common: we both love putting our heart and souls into our stories, as well as spreading hope and joy amidst the world. And if I recall, Eliza is really the true reason I'm even here right now because if it wasn't for her, I would have never stumbled upon the blogosphere. So thanks for that, Eliza dear. ;)
Soooo, now that the introductions and formalities are all out of the way, let's dive right in, shall we?
photo creds//Pinterest
School can be hard. Like, bold-all-caps kinda hard. I remember feeling overwhelmed and stressed out like crazy during the latter years of high school as well as the beginning of my time in college. And let's face it: Academics are no easy thing, my friend. So what are we poor students to do? Are we doomed to suffering all throughout our education?
The answer? Absolutely not, because as a very wise person once said, "You only fail when you stop trying."
So to help you out, I've created a little basket of seven handy tips and tricks to help you not only succeed, but fly, my darling.

Tip #1. Create lists.

Now, I know that you've probably heard this about a zillion times and you've probably tried it already and blah blah blah, right? But wait! Have you been doing it how I used to which basically means you opened your iPhone's notes app and made a to-do list on there? Cause guess what? That's probably why it didn't work. I did the same thing for awhile and it kinda worked, but I wasn't really happy with it. But here's the thing: If you don't physically write it down, you're missing that little energy boost that comes from physically crossing an item off your to-do list! This is such an important step, so please don't ignore it.
In order for this to be as satisfying as possible, I suggest getting a small notebook that you can use to physically write down all the tasks or assignments you have for a given week or maybe even just a day. Then, once you've finished something, you can cross it off and get that little burst of happiness because YOU ACCOMPLISHED SOMETHING.
Another idea would be trying out a bullet journal technique for organizing your assignments according to due dates. I tried the bullet journal for a time, but it didn't really work out long-term for me. But that doesn't mean that you won't have WAY more success with it than I did, so go give it a try if it sounds like something you'd be interested in.

Tip #2. Schedule in your homework (and mark ALL important dates)

I don't know why I waited until college to start doing this because honestly, it saved me freshman year! For me, this has just become a regular part of my week, but you could always reserve this as something you do every Sunday or Monday night if it suits your schedule. (I get assignments all throughout the week, so I have to constantly update my homework schedule.) Depending on how you want to do this, you could use your iPhone calendar, a physical planner, or a physical calendar: any way works totally fine.
Once you've decided how you're going to schedule things, next is simply figuring out how you want to do it. For me, I use my iPhone calendar because I've found that it not only works best for me, but the app also allows you to select specific colors for certain calendars, so mine looks like this:
regular events and activities=blue
homework due dates=red
concerts/shows=orange
exercise=brown
homework=yellow
important college dates=green
So using this color scheme, I'm not only able to better organize the different parts of my life, but also instantly recognize what is what when I open the app because I've memorized the colors that coordinate with each event. This is helpful when I'm in a rush or even when I'm just too lazy to really read whatever I'm supposed to be doing next.
One more tip is to try and schedule your homework in designated time chunks with little breaks in between. I haven't always been able to estimate very well how long it'll take me to do something, but it keeps me on track more times than not.

Tip #3. Learn to recognize when you need a break or a self-care night.

This is an important one because you need to take care of yourself. Burning out and crashing won't get you any closer to being ready for that test on Thursday. So learn your limits and how far you can push yourself before it's too much. And don't beat yourself up because you need a break or a night off. It's healthy to take breaks because you can't just work all the time! Sometimes you need to just take a breath and take care of YOU.
Some of my favorite ways to indulge in some self-care are long baths with a good book, a nice warm cup of hot chocolate or decaf coffee, watching a movie with my family, journaling, working on my novels, or writing some poetrical nonsense. But those are just the things that work for me! Maybe you'd prefer something more outdoorsy? Whatever it is that helps you relax and decompress, that's what you're self-care should focus on.

Tip #4. "You DO have time."

A big part of my first year in college was about learning how to balance my school life with my social/personal life. It wasn't easy, I struggled a lot, and there were a lot of times when I just didn't think I could do it. But guess what? I'm learning. I may not be there yet, but I'm well on my way to discovering what works for me and what doesn't and how to truly balance everything without completely giving up my favorite things. But how did I get to where I am now? Well, the big part of it was really just realizing that I needed to better manage my time and in turn, my anxiety because I actually did have time to go hang out with friends or family and maintain a social life. The big change came when I started learning how to just relax and choose not to stress because if I believed that I had time, it turns out I really would.

Tip #5. Tired plus caffeine doesn't always equal good.

One of my biggest tips would be this: Try not to become dependent on coffee or caffeine to get you through the week. During my senior year of high school I had some run-ins with coffee and I eventually realized that caffeine had a tendency to give me a bad attitude (though maybe that was just me). So now, whenever I get the occasional coffee, I always make sure it's decaf. I also don't drink a ton of caffeinated soda. On the rare occasion, I'll slam a Coke to get me through a long day on campus, but I try to avoid it if at all possible because it's really not good for one's health and I don't like feeling dependent on something to get me through the day.
So moral of the story: Try to sleep and if possible, avoid caffeinated soda and coffee. One way to do this could be to get a decaf coffee and just pretend that it's caffeinated. This could possibly trick your brain into thinking you're getting caffeine, thus engaging in the placebo affect. (Honestly, I do this all the time and it actually...works?)

Tip #6. Surround yourself with God's word and good friends.

This year, I came across the Bible app, YouVersion and I really don't want to turn into an advertisement, but this app changed my Bible reading around this year. In the past, I've really struggled to find time or make time to sit down and really read God's word. And while I still struggle, this app make it a little bit easier.
There are hundreds of plans to choose from, all of which come in a variety of themes: hope, fear, faith, grief, love, and many others. All you simply have to do is choose which one you want to do! They also have yearly plans and plans to help you read all the way through the Bible!
It's honestly been such a huge blessing for me this year and I hope it's able to help you too, my friend.
Also, please don't neglect your amazing friends! I know how hard it can be to schedule in time to hang out when you have homework assignments at every turn, but friend time is important too! God has placed these people in your life for a reason and we need each other to make it through with the best possible experience. So go plan a coffee date with your best friend or if that doesn't sound like fun maybe go grab dinner and a movie with a friend you haven't seen in awhile.

Tip #7. Believe in yourself and be confident.

If I can leave you with one thing to remember, it's this: Be confident! You have no idea what you're capable of achieving, my friend. You are so beautiful and I know that you can do whatever it is that you're facing right now. I know how hard it can be to believe in yourself because what if you're not good enough or what if you can't?


photo creds//Pinterest
I saw that and it just made me stop and realize that we constantly hold ourselves back because "what if I fall?" when in reality, we have no idea that if we jump we could fly! So I urge you, go take that leap of faith because darling...you will fly.
All you have to do is have faith and leap.
-Bree Dawn (To know more about me, go follow me on Pinterest and Spotify)
How do you balance school and life? Do you have any tips to add? Drop your thoughts in the comments and I'll hang out and chat with all you lovely humans.
Thursday, March 21, 2019 10 comments
Aloha! Taylor Bennett uses that word a lot & I think it's lovely. My family and I went on a trip to LA over the weekend- I thought I'd share some pictures and a few of my journal entries from that. First of all, I have a tad bit of exciting writerly news...I sent my first Dawn Chandler book to Abigayle Claire so she can edit it! Things are moving along 😄
all 9 of us 'kids' and a few of the boards

Friday, February 22, 2019
 "We're (all 11 of us) on our way to LA! We're listening to a bunch of old songs (playlist here). I already started and finished reading The Dating Dock by Dee Aspin (a woman I met at the writer's conference). It was really good!"

Coffee...the toddlers may or may not have had a few sips.
"We just stopped at Starbucks and met two guys who were also from a family of five boys and four girls."

ya, she got me
"We stopped in Frasier Park for a 15-minute snowball fight. Dad's bad at aiming."


"The toddler wouldn't let go of his snowball."

"'Twas delightful."
Saturday, February 23, 2019
"Today we had a lovely waffle bar breakfast. This couple that's letting us stay in their house is the best! We spent the day at the college my parents met at 23+ years ago."

The reason for this trip was to attend a banquet lunch and the unveiling of the hall of fame where my mom's 1995 volleyball team was featured.
 "It was a nice surprise that this event was in honor of  Ron Mehl too. I like his books! I enjoyed meeting a few of the current students during the unveiling of the Hall of Fame. I also met a few children of my mom's teammates. Oh and I met another twin!"

Longtime family friends were there since their mom was also on the volleyball team.
"The basketball game was fun. I made up stories for most of the players. After all that was over, and we'd taken a stroll around the dorms, Dad drove us by many special places. Us five oldest kids are on the couch watching Murder, She Wrote." 

Sunday, February 24, 2019

"Today we took our time having breakfast then headed to the beach. I enjoyed hanging out with Mom and playing by the waves with one of the toddlers. My favorite part was riding longboards with three of my siblings down to the pier and people-watching."


"Despite the typical sibling fighting, I truly enjoyed this vacation!"

What music do you listen to on family vacations? Do you keep a journal?
Tuesday, February 26, 2019 10 comments
Hello there! I just came back from my first writer's conference two days ago. I met many amazing, talented people and came back so inspired.

Photo credit: Conference Facebook
The many things I loved:
  • Spending the 2 1/2 drive to Livermore visiting with my bodyguard( *cough* dad *cough*).
  • Hannah's also the oldest in her family and homeschooled, so we had lots in common :)
  • The beautiful, rustic location for the conference and the rainy weather. 
Karen Barnett taught a workshop on social media. I loved chatting with her!
  • The fact that I showed up not knowing anyone (except for the few people I connected with briefly online) and walked away with many new friends.
  • The small group I got to spend time learning more about self-publishing with on the first day.
We visited a bakery after dinner.
  • Meeting these women in the hotel lobby then having dinner with them. We each talked about our writing projects and everyone was so encouraging.
  • The fact that each person I met has such a unique story to tell, whether it's non-fiction or fiction, that will touch the world in its own unique way. The fact that these writers are all striving to honor Christ gave everything such a deeper purpose too!
Lydia is so sweet and I loved spending time with her and her mom.
  • Watching Disney channel in the hotel room with my dad was fun. I caught a few minutes of the old Little Women too.
Photo credit: Conference Facebook
  • Andrea Coli entertaining us all and breaking the ice before each general session.
  • Visiting with other writers while having breakfast at the hotel each morning was wonderful!
  •  Running into the author of the devotional 'Praying with Jane'...I didn't even know she was going to be there!


  • Meeting Robin Jones Gunn (author of the Christy Miller series) and the fact that she posted the picture of her, Lydia, Hannah and I along with such a sweet message was AMAZING.
  • CHAI. They had chai at the conference. The only thing missing was my chai buddy.
  • Having dinner with twelve other writers and meeting Sydney, another teenager, was fun. We did what I'm sure many writers do when they meet in person- stalked each other on Pinterest.
Sarah Sundin & I
  • Learning more about how to get to know my characters from both Robin Jones Gunn and Sarah Sundin. They each have different, but very helpful, approaches.
  • The workshop room names! Narnia, The Shire, Neverland, etc.
Photo credit: Conference Facebook
  • A fifteen-minute Coaching & Critique appointment with Marilyn Hilton. She was so helpful and encouraging!
Lydia helped me carry the 'million' books I bought xD

Overall the whole experience was wonderful! I'm a people person and being surrounded by people who share my faith and my passion for writing was a dream come true <3

Have you ever been to a writer's conference? Which one? Any questions about this one?


Monday, February 18, 2019 13 comments

Happy (almost) February! I hope your January was filled with good books, good friends and good chai <3 This monthly wrap-up is rather short because of limited time, but I tried to include the most important things.


Books-

Total read: 6
I loved this cute middle-grade story! I'd totally recommend it to girls ages 9 to 12.

I've heard so much about this series and I finally read the first book! I loved how Christy grew spiritually throughout the book, the beach setting, the outfit descriptions, and the Disneyland scene. I didn't like that teenagers so young and far away from marriage kissed. I liked seeing how the different characters reacted to an unexpected death. Warning: There are some teen partying scenes and mature themes. That's why I didn't read it until now. 

I truly enjoyed this World War II Christian Romance! I loved how the main characters weren't the typical super handsome and super gorgeous romance characters. I loved the excitement. I loved the lesson about how much trouble small lies can get you into. I loved the humor. I could've done without all the kissing details, but that's just me. I'd recommend it to girls ages 16+

Writing-

  • I set up 'author' Facebook and Twitter accounts. I also put together a 'Dawn Chandler' Pinterest board. You can find all the links here.
  • Finished my final edits on the prologue through chapter twelve of Dawn Chandler #1. Eight more chapters to go!
  • Talked to an editor. I should be sending her my book sometime next month or in March.
  • I think I found the perfect cover illustrator. Her art is so beautiful and her prices are better than I expected!
Things are coming closer to an end, and I'm so excited about being a published author soon!


Faith & encouragement-
I realized I sometimes believe the lie that something's wrong with me, I'm not pretty or smart enough, because of the fact that I don't have a boyfriend/no one has asked me to be their girlfriend. That's not true at all. If you're believing that lie please stop now. God created you. You are beautifully & wonderfully made! Stop comparing yourself to others. As two of my friends pointed out, God is probably saving you for the amazing person he has for you! Wouldn't you rather wait for that man than have your heart broken because of premature, short and meaningless relationships?

On another note, I started taking a Perspectives class. We're learning a lot about God's plan for missions by reading the Bible. One point that really stood out was, God blesses us so that we can be a blessing to others! (see Genesis 12:2) Just take a moment to think about that, and how it should affect each of our's lives as Christians. 

How was your month? What did you read, write and learn?


Wednesday, January 30, 2019 16 comments
Hello there! I've been spending a lot of time on my (hopefully) final round of edits on my first Dawn Chandler book. This chapter was a lot of fun to write and, for the most part, makes sense without a lot of context. Something that's not mentioned (since it's in previous chapters) is the character's ages and relationships to each other. So before you start, here's this:

Chandlers-
Kenneth, 15
Dawn, 12
Beatrice, 5

Jennings-
Walter, 16
Caroline, 14
Moriah, 12
Ethan, 10
Eric, 10
Emma Jean, 8
Kate, 6
Chan, 1

Other Characters-
Uncle Wesley, Mr. Chandler’s uncle
via Pinterest

Saturday, January 8

The next day, the Jennings and Chandlers bundled up to go sledding. Caroline had already made plans with friends so she couldn’t come. Uncle Wesley was feeling better and decided to come along in her place. This was the first time the Chandlers had gone up the road towards Whitney Portal, the place where Mt. Whitney hikers start. They went through the Alabama Hills which were covered with snow. The snow made Dawn think of Abigail. Abigail loved skiing with her family. Dawn noticed one of the rock formations she and Kenneth had seen painted on the wall of the cafe the other day. Before the road began winding up the mountains, there was a roadblock keeping people from driving on the icy road. The Jennings and Chandlers stopped there then got the sleds out.

“Long time, no see.” Kenneth laughed as he shook hands with Walter.

Moriah and Dawn decided to go down on one of the bigger sleds together while Kenneth and Walter were already racing down the hill. Uncle Wesley was waiting a little further down to bring kids back up the hill after they went down. At first, Moriah and Dawn had a hard time pushing the sled off, but it finally started going. It gathered an alarmingly fast speed and the girls began to scream with delight and terror that they would run off the road or something. The girls bumped into a rock and began to slow down. Bumping into another rock, Dawn tumbled off, laughing. Moriah hopped off the sled so she could check to make sure Dawn was okay. After Moriah helped Dawn up the girls realized with dismay that the sled was going down the hill without them and was picking up even more speed. Dawn and Moriah began to run after it yelling, “Stop!” as if the sled would hear them and obey. Moriah tripped and fell which made Dawn, who was right behind her, trip and fall too. At this point, the girls gave up on the sled chase and began to laugh hysterically.

“You’re so much fun to hang out with, Dawn!” Moriah said, “I wish you lived here. We could hike together in the summer and swim in the town pool. It’s too bad you have to go back to Fresno at the end of the month.” Moriah still didn’t know that the Chandlers were thinking about moving to Lone Pine. It made Dawn feel good to know that Moriah enjoyed hanging out with her.

“I wish you lived in Fresno,” Dawn replied. “We could go to the mall and the theater together. It could be really fun.”

“I don’t think I could ever live in a big city.” Moriah laughed. “I’m definitely more of a small town farm girl.”

At this point, Uncle Wesley pulled his beaten pickup truck up next to the girls.  He honked his horn, “Do you girls want a ride back up the hill or would you rather sit there in the snow chatting?”

“We got your sled for you,” Walter said from the bed of the truck where he and Kenneth were sitting.

“Oh!” Dawn laughed. “Thank you. I think we completely forgot about it.” The two girls climbed into the back of the pickup truck and Uncle Wesley continued driving up the hill. As they went up they passed Beatrice and Mr. Chandler who were going down the hill on a bright pink sled as well as a few of the others.

“So, how did you girls lose your sled?” Kenneth asked with a twinkle in his eyes.

Both of the girls laughed. Moriah said, “Dawn you tell him.”

“No, you can,” Dawn argued.

“Oh, all right.” Moriah consented. “Dawn fell off the sled and I hopped off to see if she was alright and help her up. After that, we realized that the sled had gone on without us and we both began chasing it. Eventually, I fell and tripped. So we kinda gave up on the chase.”

“Careless, silly girls!” Walter teased quietly.

“Hey, that’s not very nice,” Dawn said although she was smiling.

Kenneth began humming the tune to We Wish You a Merry Christmas.

“Isn’t it funny that it’s almost an automatic reaction to snow that you start humming or singing Christmas carols?” Moriah observed. “Even if Christmas was almost a month ago?”

Kenneth laughed, “Until you said that I had barely even realized I was doing it.”

Uncle Wesley’s truck stopped at the top of the hill. “Get out, children,” he said. “I have to go back and get the others now.”

“Children?” Walter pretended to complain. “I’m almost seventeen…”

Eric ran up to them, “Do you wanna see the igloo me and Emma Jean are making?”

“Sure,” Dawn replied. Moriah and Dawn followed Eric to a place down the hill a little way and saw an igloo that was halfway built.

“That’s really neat! How’d you do that?” Dawn asked as she observed the perfectly rectangular blocks of snow that formed the walls.

Emma Jean was holding a plastic bin the size of a shoe box. “We pack the snow into this and then dump it out. Once we made a really big igloo and while Walter was spending the night in it, it collapsed on him.”

Eric joined in on this story, he couldn’t let his little sister have center stage. “It was really funny because Mom told him it wasn’t a good idea, but he insisted on trying it. All we heard from the house was a scream that sounded like a girl’s and then Walter yelling, ‘That was freezing cold! Remind me to never sleep in an igloo again!’”

Dawn was glad he hadn’t gotten hurt.

Everyone laughed. “Yep that’s about how it happened,” Moriah said. “Dawn, do you want to go
again?”

“I suppose so,” Dawn answered.

As the girls were getting ready to go down the hill, Walter and Kenneth asked if they wanted to race.

“What do you think?” Moriah asked Dawn with a competitive grin on her face.

“It’s so on!” Dawn answered, “Where’s the finish line?”

“There’s a pine tree that fell onto part of the road,” Walter answered. “That’s the finish line.”

“Ok,” the girls replied as they got on their sled and prepared for battle. Kenneth hopped on a green sled and Walter got behind it ready to push it down the hill then jump on.

“Ready, set, go!” Moriah yelled. The boys started out ahead. As they were looking back to see how far behind the girls were, Kenneth steered into a pile of snow that made them come to an abrupt stop. They had to get off the sled and move it over to where they could get going again. The girls passed them. As they were coming near the finish line Dawn screamed excitedly and scared Moriah which caused her to steer them off the road. They tumbled down a steep hill for about twenty feet then finally came to the bottom. The boys quickly stopped their sled and looked over the edge to see if the girls were okay.

“Dawn! Moriah! Are either of you hurt?” Walter called. At first, the girls stayed face first down in the snow with the sled lying on the ground. Kenneth ran down the hill with Walter right behind him to check on the girls. Before the boys got there the girls rolled over and started laughing hysterically.

“You two scared us!” Walter said, upset with his sister.

Kenneth started laughing along with the girls and then eventually Walter joined in too.

“What’s so funny?” Walter asked, even though he was laughing with them.

“I don’t know.” Dawn answered between giggles, “What is so funny, Moriah?”

“Beats me,” Moriah replied, still laughing really hard, “Whatever it is, it’s hilarious!”

“You two are ridiculous!” Kenneth said as he threw a small snowball at Dawn. Eventually, there was a full-fledged snowball fight going on.

They heard Uncle Wesley’s truck stop at the top of the hill. His door slammed as he got out and stood at the edge of the hill, “What is going on down there?” he asked.

Kenneth threw a snowball at Uncle Wesley.

“Young man! You’re going to pay for that.” Uncle Wesley laughed jollily as he walked down the hill. He made Dawn think of a western Santa Clause.

“Uh, oh,” Kenneth said as he hid behind Walter. The two girls wisely stepped to the side.

“So, you wanna have a snowball war?” Uncle Wesley picked up a huge handful of snow and shaped it between his bear paw like hands. Kenneth shook his head no. Uncle Wesley ignored the protest. He walked over to Kenneth and smashed the snow onto his head.

“Uncle Wesley, what are you doing to my son?” Mr. Chandler called down, good-naturedly.

“This young man said he thought he was a better snowball fighter than me.” Uncle Wesley replied.

“I said no such thing!” Kenneth cried as he got down on his knees and begged for mercy.

“You didn’t say it but that is what you meant by throwing a snowball at me.” Uncle Wesley answered as he scooped up more snow.

“Dad!” Kenneth yelled, “Help me! The old man is going to clobber me with snow.”

At this point, Walter was wise enough to step aside to where the girls were and just be an onlooker too.

“Old man?” Uncle Wesley said, pretending to be amazed. “Now that’s taking it too far.” Mr. Chandler laughed as Wesley fired another snowball at Kenneth.

“Aw, man.” Kenneth said as he tried to dodge another snowball, “Nobody is going to rescue me.”

“Nope,” Moriah answered in between giggles.

 “I think you deserve it,” Dawn added.

Wesley paused to smile at Dawn, “Good niece.” He went back to clobbering Kenneth. Even though Uncle Wesley had said it in the tone he would’ve said, ‘good dog’ it gave Dawn a warm feeling inside.

By this time Mr. Jennings was atop the hill alongside Mr. Chandler.

Right before Uncle Wesley fired another snowball at Kenneth, Mr. Chandler said, “The women are ready to head back towards home and have dinner.”

 “Come along children,” Uncle Wesley said. He dropped the snowball and he headed up the hill.

As the children followed Wesley up the hill, Kenneth gestured towards the snowball on the ground. He whispered to Walter, “Should I?”

“No, don’t.” Walter smiled as he shook his head.

“Yeah, that’s probably a wise choice,” Kenneth said and kept walking.

Without a second thought, Moriah picked up the discarded snowball and hit Kenneth in the back.

What'd you think? Also, what's your favorite winter activity?

Saturday, January 19, 2019 5 comments
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what i've read...

Replication: The Jason Experiment
Respectable Sins: Confronting the Sins We Tolerate
Donna Parker: A Spring to Remember
Orphan Island
The Mountain of the Wolf
Murder Simply Brewed
Strength for Parents of Missing Children: Surviving Divorce, Abduction, Runaways and Foster Care
Anne of Windy Poplars
The Flipside of Feminism: What Conservative Women Know—and Men Can't Say
Who Killed the American Family?
Resist
Life Just Got Real
A Royal Christmas Wedding
Almost Home
Boy Meets Girl: Say Hello to Courtship
The Hunchback of Notre-Dame
Chrissa Stands Strong
I Kissed Dating Goodbye
Storming
The Last Thing I Remember


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